Orkish Haiku

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Orkish Haiku

Post by Nimrod » Mon Jan 05, 2015 10:19 pm

I seriously need to see some Orkish Haiku. Serious haiku.

vadok ushtarak
vile torture, destruction, blood
cruel death tis mercy

Classic 5-7-5. I'll let you vote for your fav three and choose the best and add to the Palantiri along with proper credit.
How lucky I am to have something that makes saying goodbye so hard.

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Re: Orkish Haiku

Post by radioactivejesus » Mon Jan 05, 2015 11:40 pm

Serious haiku? Sounds good.

Bug find rock a rock.
Rock a rock a rock a rock
rock a rock a rock
A really bad sword with a short blade lies here.
look sword
This sword hardly even a sword. It's kind of really just a piece of metal bent like a sword. Its blade is rather short. Kind of pathetic, really.

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Re: Orkish Haiku

Post by Brian » Mon Jan 05, 2015 11:49 pm

If an orc sees a
living being, standing there,
does he kill it? Yes.

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Re: Orkish Haiku

Post by cfelch » Tue Jan 06, 2015 12:02 am

Deep within the lair
Blackbloods revel with despair
Killing mortals there
Every point ever made was an argument.

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Re: Orkish Haiku

Post by AdamBlue » Tue Jan 06, 2015 12:03 am

Hole in mountain sits
It is full of corpses now.
Eight legs cold and still.

Edit: I'll make more.

Bulgash sits above,
cackling with horrible glee.
Bloody rain, thunder.


Foraging the bogs,
Turning soil into steel,
A red hammer works.

Red Blood spills today,
Blacker blood spills tomorrow,
In the end, all die.
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Re: Orkish Haiku

Post by radioactivejesus » Tue Jan 06, 2015 12:05 am

deep in the mountain
the wheels of war are turning
Death's army marches
A really bad sword with a short blade lies here.
look sword
This sword hardly even a sword. It's kind of really just a piece of metal bent like a sword. Its blade is rather short. Kind of pathetic, really.

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Re: Orkish Haiku

Post by Nimrod » Tue Jan 06, 2015 12:53 pm

radioactivejesus wrote:Bug find rock a rock.
Rock a rock a rock a rock
rock a rock a rock
You were supposed to write it. Not your character. :lol:

The one by AdamBlue was nice. It paints a significant image for me, which is what haiku is all about. Well done.
Adamblue wrote:Hole in mountain sits
It is full of corpses now.
Eight legs cold and still.
How lucky I am to have something that makes saying goodbye so hard.

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Re: Orkish Haiku

Post by Onasaki » Tue Jan 06, 2015 8:49 pm

Forges fires burn
A sharp blade glowing brightly
Bringing death to all
I have two forces by my side
One's the truth and one's a lie
Which one's which I cannot tell
This enigma is my hell


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Re: Orkish Haiku

Post by Hawkwind » Tue Jan 06, 2015 11:46 pm

Do a sonnet next!
JESUS CHRIST, THE HELIUM!
PS4 Handle - Roadhawkes
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Re: Orkish Haiku

Post by Brian » Wed Jan 07, 2015 12:49 am

Eru's first children,
Grace and hope stripped from their souls,
So is born the Orc

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Re: Orkish Haiku

Post by Melkor » Wed Jan 07, 2015 1:07 am

Vengeance within sight
Man-filth climbing at the gate
Why does the earth quake?
“If you would be a real seeker after truth, it is necessary that at least once in your life you doubt, as far as possible, all things.”

― René Descartes

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Re: Orkish Haiku

Post by Dirgs » Wed Jan 07, 2015 1:12 am

A little snaga
crawled behind a crate to sleep
Boss knocked his teeth out

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Re: Orkish Haiku

Post by cfelch » Wed Jan 07, 2015 2:03 am

Jagged teeth above
Darkness will swallow you whole
We live in a cave

Heroes come to die
We await with open arms
Let the feast begin
Every point ever made was an argument.

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Re: Orkish Haiku

Post by Nimrod » Thu Jan 08, 2015 4:52 pm

I'm loving these, nice job everyone. Love me some pithy imagery. If someone wants to step up on the voting portion to nominate a few, I'd really appreciate it.
How lucky I am to have something that makes saying goodbye so hard.

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Re: Orkish Haiku

Post by mongwen » Sat Jan 10, 2015 11:45 am

Lol Nim. That first was in memory of the player Bugara I think, who was the most well-played halfwit I've ever seen.

My votes are for
Hole in mountain sits
It is full of corpses now.
Eight legs cold and still.

Foraging the bogs,
Turning soil into steel,
A red hammer works.

Forges fires burn
A sharp blade glowing brightly
Bringing death to all

and Brian's second submission gets the tragic haiku award. Orcs don't know where they come from, or I should say most don't. It's a good one.
A yellow-eyed, blotchy-fleshed brown uruk slowly slunks over, sneakily swaggering with a sleek step.

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